推荐信改稿:你能看出这篇文章中做了哪些改动,为什么这么改,用到了哪些写作技巧吗? 改稿前: To whom it may concern, It is my great pleasure to recommend XXX for her application of the Bachelors program at your university. As an English teacher, I have taught her English for one year. XXX is conscientious in the study of English and she takes off work unless she is really sick. She has a razor-sharp mind and analyze problems quickly and accurately. What ’ s more, XXX ’ s English is clearly articulated. As XXX ’ s teacher, I can see that she understands the importance of cooperation. As the representative in the Math course, she assists her teacher with collecting assignments, distributing handouts. By the way, XXX is a walking dictionary and she sets high standards for herself. As far as I ’ m concerned, XXX has a positive attitude to learn some knowledge and all kinds of things. Furthermore, she has a good sense of humor. For example, she always shows her enthusiasm in class. She seldom shows doubt or fear when facing problems and challenges. The last but not least, she is always ready to help others and put others first. Therefore, I am very proud of her. If you need further information about XXX, please don ’ t hesitate to contact me. 改稿后: To whom it may concern, It is my great pleasure to recommend XXX to you for her application to the undergraduate program at your university. As her English teacher, I have taught her academic writing for a whole year. Witnessing her academic performance and progress, I am delighted to say XXX owns nice personalities for further study at a western university. Through the freshman year, XXX demonstrated both high intelligence and a conscientious attitude towards English study. Having a razor-sharp mind, XXX is able to analyze problems quickly and accurately. Her essay is always well-organized, clearly written and strongly supported by adequate details. Despite her innate language gift in English, she studies diligently. Unless she gets really sick, she will never ask for leave or put off assignment. Not only an academically excellent student she is, XXX is also an attractive person in everyday life. She is full of energy, showing enthusiasm in class. She has a good sense of humor, and is always able to bring people around her good mood. She is brave, and seldom shows doubt or fear when facing problems and challenges. Last but not least, she is obliging and always puts others first. XXX ’ s magnetic personalities make her quite popular in her class. Based on XXX ’ s outstandingly academic performance and lovely personalities, I strongly recommend her to you and hope you would give her favorable consideration. If you need any further information about her, please feel free to contact me at 123456@hotmail.com .