Which of the following introduction paragraphs do you think is the best?
A.
Introduction A The bar chart illustrates the changing value in US dollars of tourism to the Egyptian economy between 1982 and 2003. Overall, it is clear that there were both increases and decreases in the amount of money generated by tourism over the period. 42 words
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Introduction B The graph shows the contribution of tourism in billions of dollars to the Egyptian economy from 1982 to 2003. Overall, there were higher amounts of money generated by tourism at the end of the period than at the beginning with the lowest in 1982 and the highest in 2000. 49 words
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Introduction C The bar chart illustrates the income generated by tourism in Egypt in certain years between 1982 and 2003. Overall, there was a higher income from tourism at the end of the period than at the beginning with an increase in income from 1982 to 2000 followed by a decline. 49 words
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Introduction D The bar chart illustrates the income generated by tourism in Egypt in certain years between 1982 and 2003. Overall, there was a higher income from tourism at the end of the period than at the beginning with an increase in income from 0.3 billion dollars in 1982 to a peak of 4.4 billion dollars in 2000 followed by a decline to around 1.7 billion dollars at the end of the period. 71 words