A good narrative usually starts with a good hook-the attention getter because it sets the stage for the story. Which two sentences would not be good hooks for a narrative essay?
A.
The roar of race-car engines ripped through the blazing heart of the day.
B.
The gleaming snow lay over the treacherous mountain like a soft white blanket, making the terrain seem safe instead of deadly.
C.
The Russian dictionary that we use in our language class has 500 pages.
D.
Amber never expected to hear the deadly sound of a rattlesnake in her kitchen garden.
E.
Whales are by far the largest marine mammals.